Friday, January 28, 2011

This First Winter

These trees have nothing green

to offer the swallow,

the purple martin, the hawk.

They’ve flown south in a huff,

leaving the chickadee and cardinal

to the coming cold,

their abandoned homes poised

on pointy branch fingers,

balanced loosely on bare limbs,

lingering reminders of loss.


Copper slivers of winter grass

slice through gold and rotting leaves,

reaching for a silver winter sun,

finding only dark and grey.

Broken fences guard empty fields,

crisscross rails keep nothing out,

let nothing alive in,

their splintered rails urge me onward.

A barn’s faded message forewarns -

still I haven’t moved forward.

2 comments:

Denis Joe said...

I have been away for a while but i return to find that you are still using birds as symbols/images/metaphors.

This is truly fantastic. It shows a disciplined approach to poetry as well as a deep love for the subject without hammering the reader into your world.

I like the tightness of these stanzas and the subtlty of the two arguments in each.

I would only disagree with the last line.

A beautiful poem!

ash said...

thank you denis - i always appreciate your comments.